Death by Porta-Potty
http://www.stripes.com/news/pacific/australian-airman-injured-in-july-portable-toilet-explosion-dies-1.155635
Someone needs to clue Stars & Stripes in on proper editing. In a report of an exploding toilet, do you think it's wise for the first paragraph to imply that it was a "joint exercise with the U.S. military"?
Someone needs to clue Stars & Stripes in on proper editing. In a report of an exploding toilet, do you think it's wise for the first paragraph to imply that it was a "joint exercise with the U.S. military"?
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